The Strengths and Weaknesses:
Continuity of the editing.
Editing on the beat of the music.
Smooth cuts.
In and out of focus shots; where they have been edited.
The pace of the editing in time with the beat of the song.
The pace of the editing in time with the beat of the song.
Weaknesses:
More structure needed.
More sexual suggestion.
Cut down from 3 minutes to 2:40 minutes.
I think you mean continuity rather than fluid editing - can you change this please. Also comment on the pacing of the video - to the beat of the song and how the images are cut.
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